Sun and Moon – a Quadrille
The Sun burns until rains fall
in twilight breezes’ cooling thrall
the night rolls in with silent step
stars that twinkle and brightly jest
the Moon looks on in quiet beauty
guarding night, her solemn duty
night ends, Moon subsides
once again, Sun rise
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For the Monday Quadrille at dversepoets.com
Til next time ~Peace ~JPP
Itβs not easy to pen a rhyming, metered quadrille and you succeeded. Bravo!
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Thank you so much
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An enjoyable read. I like the rhyming pattern in this piece. Thanks for sharing. π
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Thank you so much, it was great fun to write
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And the cycle continues. Lovely rhyming verses of the sun and moon. And that photo is spectacular.
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Thank you so much sunrise in Kapaa, Hawaii π
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This is a marvelous piece JP, a joy to read!
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Oh thank you so much, it was so fun to write
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The tag team of Sun and Moon π
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Always together, eternally apart π
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And so the game of hide and seek rolls on.
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Nice last line.
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An enjoyable craft of words on a beautiful cycle to follow.
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Thank you
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The cycle of nature so exquisitely penned!
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Thank you so much.
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Brilliant! Absolutely stunning! I don’t know about other folks, but I’d definitely pay for a poem like this! Metered to perfection and also rich in content. Kudos! πβΊοΈ
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Thank you so much π
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