
Laura is our host for dVerse poetics this week asking us for a poem based on paintings, or the titles of paintings. Do visit the pub for all the fascinating details.
I must say this was fun and challenging. I chose “Convergence” by Jackson Pollock and started with a painterly poem based on the title, an attempt to paint for you the vision I see when I think about “convergence.” Then, when I looked up the actual artwork, the words came out much different even though (for me) the feeling was the same. I should have expected the unexpected from Pollock’s work. I must say, I see much stargazing in my future because of this prompt so thank you ever so much Laura.
Convergence Part 1 — a painterly poem
convergence of planets
align on a starry night
leaning back on my elbows
watching the indigo sky
devolve into the stars of Orion
the new moon rises in Gemini
your lips graze my throat
draws a shuddering breath
you point out Betelgeuse,
a red star burning bright,
and Rigel steadfast and true
your arm wraps around me
as I shiver, stealing
warmth from your body
against the night air
expectantly, I breathe you in
and exhale into your kiss
let the convergence begin
Convergence Part 2 an ekphrastic poem
Lines converge
in distant galaxies
harsh black and white
splashes of red and gold
Orion Nebula filled
with gaseous debris,
vapors and mist
kiss of the heavens
strength of the eons
womb of the stars
Til next time ~Stay Wild Moonchild ~JP
Both poems ~ beautifully converge, compliment one another.
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Thank you so much. Planetary convergences fascinate me. 🙂
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Nothing more romantic than star crossed lovers. nice.
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Thanks Sean, It’s such a cliche I know, but still so, so very true.
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Both excellent!
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Thank you so much. I’m not usually interested in abstract art but Pollock’s work intrigues me.
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Beautifully done! Love both of them.
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Thank you Grace, I had a lot of fun with it and learned something too.
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