De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) is hosting at dVerse Poets pub for Quadrille 93. “Pen us a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting the title), including some form of the word spirit.”
Spirit of Light
A star in the dark shall be woken
light from the shadows shall spring
spirit so strong can’t be broken
bells too long silent won’t ring
remember to listen and hear
when one star stands alone in the darkness
then every nightmare shall fear
word count 44
Til next time ~Peace ~JPP
I love this first line, especially:
“A star in the dark shall be woken”
I can see it blinking open…
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thank you so much. 🙂
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I like the star awakening in the dark.
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Thanks, it’s a special theme for me. 😉
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I like this “spell” and how you end it. Light will always vanquish the dark.
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Always … it’s a part of Star’s prophecy from my WIP. Thanks so much. 🙂
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Cool. Your WIP sounds like a good story, JP.
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Thanks so much, I think it will be if I ever get my crappy first draft finished. 😉
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You’re very welcome. I know about that polishing polishing editing editing, it does seem to be a never ending process.
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That’s brilliant. Like the rhythm. 🙂
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Thank you, 🙂
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🙂
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This so well conjured with that star … we all know the story but you still made me think of it again
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