
Kim is hosting this week’s quadrille at dVerse Poetics and our challenge is “Iād like you to take any meaning, form or compound of the word keep, and write a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting your title), including the prompt word.
Dragon’s Keep
Shining stars of diamonds
sparkles glint off walls of gold
water runs in wide rivulets
the sound like clinking coins
changing hands
The walls are slick with damp
dank smells burn the eyes
the shadows lengthen
dark and deep
here within the dragon’s keep
word count 44
Til next time ~Peace ~JPP
Great poem, JP!
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Thank you š
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Nice sound in those last three lines.
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Thanks Frank š
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Love those last three lines
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Thanks so much, they were the original basis for the whole poem. Originally it was much longer. š
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I do find short is often best š
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I like the contrast between the shining stars of diamonds, the sparkle and water like clinking coins in the first stanza, and the dampness, dankness and darkness of the second stanza. If I had any treasure worth protecting, Iād trust a dragon to guard it well.
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Thanks so much. Dragons do love their treasure. š
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