Bjorn is hosting at dVerse Poets Pub in Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft tonight and instructs us:

to invent new metaphors, try to surprise, combine them and paint your emotions or feelings in the you like (which is actually a cliche in itself). Do not hesitate to make them complex.”


As the greyness of morning
blends dark of night
and light of day

So stillness binds
with words unspoken
hovering in the pauses

When the heart catches
at the breaking of dawn
with dazzling light

In the moments between
sleep and waking
when dreams are still reality

There is my love for you waiting
in all of the moments there are
and all of the moments that aren’t

Til next time ~Peace ~JPP

17 thoughts on “Moments

  1. This line caught my attention. So many times we try to hold onto that dreamy reality and it never seems to happen. I go back to sleep trying to capture the rest, but it never seems to happen. Nicely done!

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