Today on dverse’s Tuesday Poetics Laura asks us to:
The Poetics Challenge here is to select ONE of the poems and write your own interpretation – what the poem conjures for you, what personal feelings it touches on. You may want to use the title or make use of some of the words or just try to keep the flavour of the poem.
I have chosen:
Octavio Paz(1914-1998) – Another Spanish speaker and more recent Nobel prize winner. Born in Mexico, he was a political activist, ambassador and essayist so that much of his poetry reads like prose poems, “written within the perpetual motion and transparencies of the eternal present tense” **
Two Bodies
Two bodies face to face
are at times two waves
and night is an ocean.
Two bodies face to face
are at times two stones
and night a desert.
Two bodies face to face
are at times two roots
laced into night.
Two bodies face to face
are at times two knives
and night strikes sparks.
Two bodies face to face
are two stars falling
in an empty sky.
Somewhere
Somewhere two bodies
huddle together
seeking warmth
against the cold
somewhere two hands
entwine together
holding fast
though growing old
somewhere two voices
lift in song
music soft
and bright
somewhere two eyes
silently behold
the coming
of the light
but here one heart
lies breaking
tears fall
like acid rain
two hearts may sing
but all alone
one heart cries out
in pain
word count 64
Til next time ~Peace ~JPP
Your poem is really touching. I love the twist at the end. You hit us with reality with your lines. Well done!
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This is heart rending JP – beautiful!
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Thank you 😀
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you have kept to the present and just brought one shadow of the future to this lovely interpretation of the prompt;
“somewhere two hands
entwine together
holding fast
though growing old”
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Thank you so much
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I love how you went beyond the bodies to eyes hands and finally hearts… the loneliness of one in the end is devastating.
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Thanks so much, in the end it is the peril of love, to end up alone
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You’ve included various elements that touch on intimacy, yet cannot prevent its loss, which I think is what Octavio Paz was saying at the end. Well done.
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Thank you so much that’s the impression I got from Paz’s poem
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Poignant and touching. I identify with your final stanza.
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