This week’s 50-word Thursday prompt brought to us by Teresa at the haunted wordsmith Maybe I needed to learn to stay more alert when traveling in a foreign country” – Lisa Bullard, Turn Left at the Cow.
Herein lies the final entry of my journal, read it well. The Captain continues south, certain that we will find land. The crew does not share his optimism. Food has all gone bad, water supply dwindling; we have little strength left. Wait, what is that noise on deck? Bloody PIRATES!!!
word count 50
Til next time ~Peace ~JPP
Wide Eyed Wonderings 
Bummer. Tons of expression in so little words.
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That’s the most ruthless editing I’ve ever done! Thanks for stopping by 😉
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That’s great, fits perfectly.
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Thank you so much. It’s such a common truth
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